Showing posts with label Fourth and Goal. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Fourth and Goal. Show all posts

Jul 23, 2011

Animals as Secondary Characters

Animals as Secondary Characters

I’m an animal lover. Our small farm in Western Washington near Puget Sound consists of two pony-sized dogs, a prince disguised as an orange tabby cat, and one prima donna horse. You’ll rarely read a book of mine which doesn’t have an animal as a secondary character. Animals add a bit of humor and fun to any situation.

In The Gift Horse I experimented with a small amount of scenes in Gabby’s point of view. Gabby is a very large Hanoverian show horse. She’s got an attitude, and she knows how to use it. Essentially, she’s modeled after my own opinionated Hanoverian mare. Throughout the book, the heroine is being sabotaged, and Gabby witnesses the acts on more than one occasion. I loved developing Gabby’s character, giving her a quirky personality and a voice.

In Fourth and Goal, the animal star of the book is a kleptomaniac chocolate Lab named Simon. Simon is constantly stealing things, such as the heroine’s only set of car keys. He is also terrorized by the heroine’s cat.

Horses and dogs were a natural for me to write about. Cats were not, until a few years ago when my cat-hating husband allowed a stray cat into our house. The next thing we knew, we were owned by a cat. I knew this cat (and how quickly he won over my husband) had to be in my next book and he is.

In my sequel to Fourth and Goal, the heroine is an animal communicator. The animal star of the show is the orange tabby cat who lives next door. The cat, a bit of a drama-queen, is quite vocal after having been relegated to the role of barn cat by the new owner of the property.  The heroine confronts her neighbor, a bad-boy pro football player, and insists he take care of his cat. The football player has no intention of letting a fur-spreading, litter-box using, flea-infested cat into his home. The cat’s goal is to reinstate his role as house cat. If you have cats, you know what’s coming next. In no time, the tabby has taken over the house. He sleeps on the pillow, uses the arm of the leather couch for a scratching post, and spreads cat hair everywhere. The hero is at his mercy. You gotta love a man who loves animals, regardless of his other flaws. It’s a hoot writing about how this little tabby cat wraps the hero around his paw and a great way to show this alpha male’s soft side.

I’ll continue to use animals in my books for as long as I write. Do you enjoy reading a book with animals as secondary characters? Have you read any good books lately with animals as secondary characters? I’d love to hear your comments.

Jami Davenport
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Jami Davenport has been writing since she was old enough to know the alphabet. An advocate of happy endings, Jami writes sexy romantic comedy, sizzling suspense, and equestrian fiction. Jami lives on a small farm near Puget Sound with her husband, a former Green Beret turned plumber. In her spare time, Jami rides and shows her dressage horse. An avid boater, Jami has spent countless hours in the San Juan Islands, the setting for her first two books. In her opinion, it is the most beautiful place on earth.

Jun 24, 2011

Writing for a Niche

I’ve written since I was old enough to write words, but I never shared my stories. They were private to me. Many years ago, maybe fifteen or twenty, I started a story with a football player hero named Derek and his relationship with Rachel.


About five or six years ago, several friends encouraged me to share my stories and write for publication. I joined an RWA chapter and took tons of craft workshops. The first rule I was told about romance writing was sports heroes don’t sell unless you’re Susan Elizabeth Phillips. Well, believe it or not, at the time I’d never read any of her books, so I bought them all and loved them.


But I had two problems: My original football hero romance seemed really similar to one of hers, and no one would ever believe I’d written it before reading her books. Second, sports hero romances are a hard sell to big publishers unless you’ve already established a name for yourself.


I stashed my handwritten chapters in a chest in my attic, used my heroine in another book, and wrote Who’s Been Sleeping in My Bed? In 2008, I sold Who’s to Siren Publishing. Yet, I always knew I’d return to my football hero romance someday.


With the increasing popularity of ebooks and the number of small presses available, a whole new world has opened up for writers. In the past, if you didn’t write a book with mass-market, commercial appeal, you had little chance of getting it published. Small publishers are filling the niche markets -- areas larger publishers won’t touch because the mass-market appeal isn’t there, or they believe it isn’t.


At this point, I’d published six books, the three m/f books mentioned above, and three ménages under a different pen name. That football hero romance kept haunting me, and I decided to start from scratch and write it, even though the characters stayed essentially the same. To me there appeared to be niche for sports hero romances. I should know, I swear I’ve read them all. Besides, what’s sexier than a sweaty, muscular man in those tight football pants?


I had one obstacle, I’d used the heroine’s character and personality in another book. She needed redefining.


Originally, Rachel, my heroine, was an interior designer. Then I made her an aspiring veterinarian trying to get into vet school. That version of the book just didn’t work. As I toyed with Rachel’s need for a career change, I reflected back on the football romances I’d read lately. Most of the heroines weren’t football fans, rarely went to a game, and in several, the hero quit the game for the heroine.


I didn’t want my book to be that kind of book. I love football, and I don’t believe I’m alone. It’s my understanding 45 percent of all NFL fans are women. So I took a gamble on their being a niche for a book with heroine who actually lived and breathed football as much as the hero.

In the final version of the book, Rachel attempts to break into the male-dominated ranks of football scouts, a far cry from her “original” profession, as an interior designer. In fact, my editor stated this book was a football story with a romance, rather than a romance story with some football.

Within a week of submitting this version of Fourth and Goal, Loose Id offered to publish it. The book came out on Tuesday in ebook format.

I’ve never believed in books of the heart. Authors should pour their hearts and souls into every book they write, so all their books should be books of the heart. Yet, I must admit this book comes as close to a book of the heart as any book I’ve written. I loved writing Fourth and Goal. I hope my readers love reading it.

I’m working on the sequel, starring Tyler Harris, the bad-boy quarterback in Fourth and Goal. Tyler meets his match when my animal communicator heroine thrusts an orange tabby cat into his life.

May 26, 2011

Fourth and Goal by Jami Davenport

I'm very happy to announce that my football hero romance, Fourth and Goal, is now available. If I have a book of my heart, this book is it. I started writing this book close to a dozen years ago. When I become more serious about getting published, everyone told me "sports romances don't sell" so I abandoned this book. Yet, I always knew I'd return to it some day.

If you know me personally, you know I love football.

Over the past few years I became frustrated with the football hero romances currently being published. In the vast majority of them, the heroine did not like or understand football, the hero often gave up the game for the heroine, and/or football was merely an afterthought. You could have changed the hero's career and nothing in the story would change.

So I asked myself: What if? What if the heroine is not only a fan, but she wants a career in football? What if she's more knowledgeable about the game than most men? What if the hero isn't a big star but a struggling third stringer attempting to resurrect his career? What if I write this book for women who truly love and understand football?

So I dusted off my old football hero romance, rewrote the entire book, and here it is years and years later. I think the wait was well worth it, and I hope you do, too.

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Fourth and Goal
Book 1 in my Seattle Lumberjacks Football Series
By Jami Davenport
Available from Loose Id
BUY LINK: http://www.loose-id.com/Fourth-and-Goal.aspx 

Blurb:

In a game played on and off the field, only one of them will emerge the winner.

Armed with an uncanny ability for evaluating football talent, a dogged determination to succeed in a man's world, and an empty bank account, Rachel McCormick agrees to help struggling wide receiver Derek Ramsey get his game back. Rachel believes Derek, her former best friend and lover, knows the truth behind a points-shaving scandal which ruined her father. She vows to expose the secret even if it destroys Derek in the process.

When Derek's coach suggests sex as an excellent tension reliever the night before a game, Rachel takes one for the team. The next day, Derek has the best performance of his not-so lustrous pro football career. As Derek and Rachel rack up nights in bed and other places, the team racks up wins on the field. Rachel is torn between her loyalty to her father and her growing affection for Derek. Now it's fourth and goal, one second left on the clock. Their hearts are on the line. Do they trust each other enough to go for the long bomb or do they get dropped for a loss?

May 2, 2011

New This Week: Fourth and Goal

Fourth and Goal
By Jami Davenport


Blurb:

In a game played on and off the field, only one of them will emerge the winner.

Armed with an uncanny ability for evaluating football talent, a dogged determination to succeed in a man’s world, and an empty bank account, Rachel McCormick agrees to help struggling wide receiver Derek Ramsey get his game back. Rachel believes Derek, her former best friend and lover, knows the truth behind a points-shaving scandal which ruined her father. She vows to expose the secret even if it destroys Derek in the process.

When Derek’s coach suggests sex as an excellent tension reliever the night before a game, Rachel takes one for the team. The next day, Derek has the best performance of his not-so lustrous pro football career. As Derek and Rachel rack up nights in bed and other places, the team racks up wins on the field. Rachel is torn between her loyalty to her father and her growing affection for Derek. Now it’s fourth and goal, one second left on the clock. Their hearts are on the line. Do they trust each other enough to go for the long bomb or do they get dropped for a loss?

Excerpt:

Chapter One -- The Kickoff

           
            Hiring the one woman he could never forget was a dumb-assed idea and the wrong play to run, but Derek Ramsey took the ball and ran with it anyway. Five years ago, his one-weekend affair with Rachel McCormick had tackled him for an emotional loss. She’d been his best female buddy, and he’d fucked up a good thing by following his dick instead of his brain. After battling a half decade of guilt and coulda-shouldas, he dreaded and anticipated this reunion.
            She’d been employed as his caretaker and living in the little house next to his barn for a few days. He’d managed to avoid contact by taking an impromptu weekend visit to his dad and stepmom a few hundred miles away. But he couldn’t stay away forever.
            Weary of postponing the inevitable, Derek walked down the driveway from his ranch house to the barn and small caretaker’s house. Pausing halfway down the hill, he whistled for backup. Consider him a coward, but his chocolate Lab would serve as a diversion if this reunion didn’t go well. Oddly, Simon didn’t come running. Derek shrugged. He must be chasing rabbits in the woods or something.
            He’d have to go it alone. As he rounded the last bend in his driveway, Rachel McCormick stomped up the hill toward him.
            Oh fuck. He knew females. He’d endured growing up with an older sister. Rachel had that close-fisted, furious carriage to her stride that meant only one thing: someone was going to die. Please, God, don’t let it be him.
            Even as he planned possible escape routes, his male head perused her body and responded with a resounding thumbs-up, though it wasn’t really his thumb that was up.
            The woman marching toward him with murder in her eyes barely resembled his tomboy buddy from his high school and college days. This Rachel wore a navy blue blazer with matching skirt and shoes, complete with manicured nails and makeup. The suit hugged her tall, lean body and accentuated her curves and straight-to-heaven legs. Long reddish brown hair was pulled back into a tidy ponytail. While he preferred the blue jeans and T-shirt version, this one was just as gorgeous and way more unapproachable. Don’t mess with me radiated from every pore in her body. Not a glimpse of the shy, sweet Rachel he had once known.
            “Rachel, good to see you again.” Derek spoke calmly -- hoping to defuse the bomb -- and halted a few steps from her.
            She didn’t return his small talk. Green eyes blazing, she scowled, as dangerous as a hand grenade with the pin pulled in the hands of a chimpanzee.
            “Problem?” he asked conversationally and forced a pleasant smile on his face.
            “Do you own a demon chocolate Lab?”
            Derek barked a laugh and sealed his death sentence. Her expression went beyond homicidal. “I have a Lab named Simon. He’s opinionated and untrainable. It sounds like you’ve met him.”
            “How long has he engaged in a life of crime?”
            “Oh shit. What did he steal now?”
            “My truck keys. My only set.”
            “Oh.”
            “Where is the little delinquent?” She glanced up and down the driveway.
            “I called for him earlier. He didn’t come. I suspect he’s busy burying the evidence.”
            “I missed a job interview because of that hoodlum.” Her laser-tight glare sliced through his defenses.
            “I’m sorry. I could get you a cab.”
            “It’s too late now.” She spoke through gritted teeth and visibly drew in a long, calming breath. A split second of uncertainty flashed across her face, peppered with a vulnerability that brought memories flooding back to him of the girl he had once known. Sweet Rachel with a passion for football and a kind word for even the most unworthy person.
            He watched as she gathered her composure and hid behind an emotionless mask. “I still need my keys.”
            “I doubt we’ll find them. He’s very good. A serial digger.”
            “What do you expect when you name a dog Simon? It’s a self-fulfilling prophecy.” She stared up the dirt road. “My keys could be anywhere.”
            Derek didn’t hold out much hope. Dense woods surrounded the driveway on both sides. At the end of the woods was a large field, cross-fenced into several smaller grassy paddocks. It’d take an act of God to find her keys. He truly doubted the Big Guy considered such a trivial matter worthy of his attention.
            “So Simon’s on your hit list along with me.”
            “Right up there at the top.” No denial of his place on the list.
            “Are you a member of AAA?”
            She pointed down the driveway. “That’s my truck. What do you think?”
            He knew what he thought. He thought her lips looked pretty kissable, even without lipstick or gloss. He thought she was the sexiest thing he’d seen in a long time. And he thought -- oh damn, every thought bordered on dangerous and impossible and stupid.
            “Derek.” She stared at him as if she expected an answer, but he’d be damned if he could remember the question.
            “Yeah?”
            “I said I’ve scaled back on material goods and choose to live life simply.”
            He raised one eyebrow, not buying that one. “Judging by the dents in the thing, you might want to part with a few bucks…for your own safety.”
            “Harvey has character.” Her anger still simmered below the surface, and a stranger stared back at him with frosty green eyes. Still beautiful, but formal and cold. He liked her better mad.
            Derek snorted. “Harvey looks like he escaped a life sentence in a wrecking yard.”
            “He runs great.” Rachel squared her shoulders and stood up straighter. She gave him her most charming smile, as if she didn’t have a care in the world. “Look, champ, I’d love to stand out here and shoot the breeze with you, but I’m a busy woman. Your agent already discussed the particulars of the position with me.”
            He imagined all sorts of particular positions he’d prefer to do with her. She’d feel pretty good in his arms right about now, all soft and warm. And then he’d take her to bed and bury his cock deep inside her. She’d scream and beg for more, just like one weekend so long ago. Derek shook his head. This line of thinking headed nowhere but trouble and stopped now.
            “I’ll get you a locksmith.”
            “Don’t bother. I’ll call one.”
            Derek wiped sweat off his brow and shoved his hair off his forehead. Damn. Was she so oblivious to him that she wasn’t picking up on his thoughts? He hoped so. As far as money, he knew better than to offer any. She had her pride. He’d let her keep it. He knew how valuable pride was. Since college, his none too lustrous pro career had severely dented his.
            A joyous bark caught his attention. Simon trotted down the road toward them. A stick hung from his mouth, and his tail wagged with enthusiasm. No sign of stolen goods. On his best doggy behavior, the felonious Lab sat down next to Derek, grinning for all he was worth and incredibly pleased with himself.
            “Simon, meet Rachel. Rachel, meet Simon.” Simon thumped his tail on the ground and gazed up at her.
            “We’ve met.” Rachel glared at the dog. Undaunted, Simon took it as a compliment and drooled on her foot.
            “Rae, I’m sorry. He’s my dog. I’ll take care of this.”
            “A dog-skin rug in front of my fireplace would be payment enough.”
            “You don’t have a fireplace.”
            “One small detail. I’ll build a campfire on the porch.”
            “You’re a heartless woman.”
            “Don’t you forget it.

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Apr 23, 2011

Animal Inspiration

I'm an animal person. Currently, my menagerie consists of 2 dogs, a horse, and a cat. In fact, you will always find an animal in my books, some play major parts, some are bit characters. Fourth and Goal, my Loose Id book due out on May 3, contains a kleptomaniac Labrador. The sequel, Forward Passes, features an opinionated orange tabby cat. The inspiration for this cat came from my own orange tabby cat.

We're not really cat people (or should I say we weren't), but a nice barn cat that doesn't spread cat hair all over your house was my idea of a cat. Now, my husband is one of those macho guys (a former Army Ranger and SF Weapons Sergeant) who doesn't like cats at all. At least, he "claimed" he didn't.

A few years ago in the fall, an orange tabby moved into our barn. Hey, I was fine with that. They're ruthless mousers, and I'm all for a friendly little barn cat.

So we fed her. We named her Cat Ballou. We took her in to get shots and to be fixed. Oops, Cat Ballou was a he not a she, and he was already fixed. So Cat Ballou became Khat.

Problem is Khat didn't want to be a barn cat. He had greater aspirations. He wanted to be a house cat. Khat started lobbying for house cat status, following us around when we were outside, bitching about his quality of life, and insisting he belonged in the house. I held strong. No cat hair in my house.

That winter my husband injured his back at work and was flat on the couch for a few weeks.

Day two on the couch--I came home from work. There was Khat on Dennis' chest, both of them sound asleep.

One year later....

So much for the barn cat.

If you have cats, you know the rest. The cat has taken over.

A few years later, I was having a baby shower for my daughter-in-law. One of her friends mentioned that Khat looked just like a cat her sister had. Come to find out, we think he is the same cat. Her sister's cat had escaped from their car a few miles from our house in the same time frame Khat showed up in our barn. So the mystery of how Khat became a stray is solved (so we think). Regardless, I made sure it was understood that this woman wouldn't be getting cat back.

This little guy has it made. He's taken over the ottoman in the man cave, the couch in the living room, the foot of our bed, and our guest bed. The last time we had a guest stay at our house, he bitched until the guest let him in the bedroom where he immediately took over the bed. What a life.

When I die, I want to come back as a cat. Our cat.

As I mentioned, Khat is the star of my latest WIP and Book 2 in my football romance series. In fact, he plays a large part in the book.

Feb 26, 2011

A Different Kind of Sports Hero

When Cassandra suggested we do back-to-back blogs on why we chose to write about sports heroes, I was more than game. You see, I'm a football junkie from way back. I love baseball, hockey, and basketball, too, but football is my sport.

Many years ago I wrote the first incarnation of Fourth and Goal. I was new to romance writing and RWA in particular. It didn't take long for me to hear all the negative remarks about sports heroes and book sales. I put F&G away and worked on other books.

Last year after a particularly long bout of writer's disinterest (I wasn't blocked, just not interested in anything I was writing), I pulled the book back out of mothballs. I'd written it so long ago, all I used was the idea and the characters, but none of the actual writing. After finishing it, I sent it to three NY editors and received three very nice rejections. Each one said: "Love the story, but sports heroes don't sell." Okay, no surprise there. I'd heard that for years.

But why don't they sell? Could it be the the authors who write about them don't really know or care about the sports they write about? Is it possible many readers are knowledgeable enough about sports that most of these books fall short and don't capture their interest? I know I've been frustrated by the huge amount of football hero romances in which the hero gives up his career for the heroine or the heroine is completely ignorant of or hates football. It's pretty much the norm for sports hero books. Yet, according to the NFL, over 45 percent of their fans are women. Certainly these women read. Maybe sports hero romances fill a niche market, rather than being the type of story which fits the mass market?

I really don't know the correct answers to the above questions. What I do know is that I wanted to write a different kind of sports hero romance in which my heroine, Rachel, not only knows football but wants a career as a pro football scout. Derek, my hero, is a struggling wide receiver on the verge of being washed up. Not only only does the book follow their romance, but it follows the team's transformation from basement dweller to Super Bowl contender.

I'm very excited about this book and am halfway through the second book in my Seattle Lumberjacks Football Series featuring Derek's bad boy cousin, Tyler, who's met his match in the form of an animal communicator heroine and an spoiled orange tabby cat.

Since Fourth and Goal is still in the final editing stage, I'm not able to post an excerpt here, but I do have a treat for you with an adult excerpt of Cassandra Carr's Talk to Me, due out next month from LI and featuring a hockey hero:

The elevator doors opened, and Drew hurried to unlock his apartment and punch his code into the security pad before continuing straight to his bedroom. He spun and picked Jamie up as she neared the door, and she let out a squeak of protest.
“Drew!”
“What? I’m trying to be romantic. Efficient too.” He grinned at her when she struggled to get out of his grip. The way she fought against him both amused and aroused him. “Not so fast,” he warned her. “I’m not planning to let you get away until I’m good and finished with you.”
Jamie cocked an eyebrow. “Good and finished? Be still my heart! Such dreamy talk from a man like you! I had no idea.”
Drew laughed and dropped Jamie on the king-size bed with enough force to make her bounce, then climbed on top of her. Before she could protest again, he’d pressed his erection into her belly and taken her lips in another deep kiss. Jamie melted beneath him, snaking her hands around his neck while his found her hips, pulling her closer. “You need to get naked,” he declared, rolling off her.
“Just me? That’s hardly fair. If I’m getting naked, then this time, so are you.” Her beautiful, full lips pouted at him.
He stood up, and in seconds, his pants and boxer briefs landed in a heap on the floor. He pulled his shirt over his head and added it to the pile. “Your turn.”
Jamie rose up on her elbows and stared at him in disbelief. “How did you do that so fast? And may I add, very nice.” She smiled and waggled her eyebrows, giving him a quick once-over.
“When I want something, I don’t waste time. And I want you naked. Now.”
He reached over and started yanking her top over her head, but she batted his hands away.
“Hey -- stop that. You’re going to dislocate my shoulder with your beastlike strength.”
Drew laughed but allowed Jamie to gently pull her blouse over her head. He took it and tossed it on the chair near the window. Next she tugged her jeans off, leaving her in only her bra and panties, which Drew made short work of.
He groaned when she was fully nude. “God, you’re fucking gorgeous, you know that? And I’m gonna put my hands and my tongue and my mouth and my cock everywhere on and in your beautiful body, so you better be ready.”
Jamie shivered, and he covered her body with his, kissing her briefly before moving down her jawline, sucking and licking. This is gonna be good.
 From Talk to Me by Cassandra Carr, due out in March at Loose Id.

Jami currently has three published books. You can find out more at http://www.jamidavenport.com/.

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