Jul 2, 2008

Wednesdays Words - Hot Flash Fiction!

Hot to Trot Flash fiction from the authors and readers of Loose Id.

What can you do in 100-250 words?

3 comments:

Sage Whistler said...

Golden Tease

Fingers tapping impatiently on his binoculars, Derek leaned forward until his nose almost touched the cool surface of his window. A white cloud blossomed on the glass from his exasperated breath. Where is he? Every night at eleven thirty his neighbor appeared across the courtyard, stood before his glass patio doors, and gave Derek an unbelievable show. It was twelve fifteen now. Maybe he’d tired of playing the game. Derek lowered his binoculars to call it a night, but the curtains twitched at the apartment across from his.
Derek's pulse raced and every platelet in his bloodstream began a mad dash south. Jerking the binoculars up, Derek peered at perfection. The golden God posed naked as the day he was born. Golden, as Derek had come to think of him, stood sideways, teasing him with the promise of more. His neighbor’s stance revealed the honed muscles of his thigh and calf, the round mound of his ass, and one sculpted arm. His bent leg hid the good bits. With his head inclined, a curtain of honey-blond hair covered his handsome face. Golden teased him for an eternity, a lifetime, before he moved again. Instantly, Derek balls drew up tight and his cock jammed against his zipper. Golden slapped one broad hand on the glass. Ice blue eyes stared at him from across the courtyard. Scanning the note in Golden's palm, Derek reached for his keys.

Golden smiled and crumbled the note in his fist. It said: My place or yours.



Thanks to the ladies of AWH for helping me narrow it down. I swear I couldn't get it under 350.lol

Trista Ann Michaels said...

I love it...:) Keep going...LOL

Amanda Young said...

Very nice, Sage. The word 'golden' in the title scared me for a minute there. lmao

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