Jun 24, 2011

Writing for a Niche

I’ve written since I was old enough to write words, but I never shared my stories. They were private to me. Many years ago, maybe fifteen or twenty, I started a story with a football player hero named Derek and his relationship with Rachel.


About five or six years ago, several friends encouraged me to share my stories and write for publication. I joined an RWA chapter and took tons of craft workshops. The first rule I was told about romance writing was sports heroes don’t sell unless you’re Susan Elizabeth Phillips. Well, believe it or not, at the time I’d never read any of her books, so I bought them all and loved them.


But I had two problems: My original football hero romance seemed really similar to one of hers, and no one would ever believe I’d written it before reading her books. Second, sports hero romances are a hard sell to big publishers unless you’ve already established a name for yourself.


I stashed my handwritten chapters in a chest in my attic, used my heroine in another book, and wrote Who’s Been Sleeping in My Bed? In 2008, I sold Who’s to Siren Publishing. Yet, I always knew I’d return to my football hero romance someday.


With the increasing popularity of ebooks and the number of small presses available, a whole new world has opened up for writers. In the past, if you didn’t write a book with mass-market, commercial appeal, you had little chance of getting it published. Small publishers are filling the niche markets -- areas larger publishers won’t touch because the mass-market appeal isn’t there, or they believe it isn’t.


At this point, I’d published six books, the three m/f books mentioned above, and three ménages under a different pen name. That football hero romance kept haunting me, and I decided to start from scratch and write it, even though the characters stayed essentially the same. To me there appeared to be niche for sports hero romances. I should know, I swear I’ve read them all. Besides, what’s sexier than a sweaty, muscular man in those tight football pants?


I had one obstacle, I’d used the heroine’s character and personality in another book. She needed redefining.


Originally, Rachel, my heroine, was an interior designer. Then I made her an aspiring veterinarian trying to get into vet school. That version of the book just didn’t work. As I toyed with Rachel’s need for a career change, I reflected back on the football romances I’d read lately. Most of the heroines weren’t football fans, rarely went to a game, and in several, the hero quit the game for the heroine.


I didn’t want my book to be that kind of book. I love football, and I don’t believe I’m alone. It’s my understanding 45 percent of all NFL fans are women. So I took a gamble on their being a niche for a book with heroine who actually lived and breathed football as much as the hero.

In the final version of the book, Rachel attempts to break into the male-dominated ranks of football scouts, a far cry from her “original” profession, as an interior designer. In fact, my editor stated this book was a football story with a romance, rather than a romance story with some football.

Within a week of submitting this version of Fourth and Goal, Loose Id offered to publish it. The book came out on Tuesday in ebook format.

I’ve never believed in books of the heart. Authors should pour their hearts and souls into every book they write, so all their books should be books of the heart. Yet, I must admit this book comes as close to a book of the heart as any book I’ve written. I loved writing Fourth and Goal. I hope my readers love reading it.

I’m working on the sequel, starring Tyler Harris, the bad-boy quarterback in Fourth and Goal. Tyler meets his match when my animal communicator heroine thrusts an orange tabby cat into his life.

Jun 23, 2011

When Life Hands You Lemons

I'm sure we've all heard the phrase above. When life hands you lemons, make lemonade.

Sometimes that can be very hard to do. You might not be in the mood for lemonade. Or not even thirsty. Or *gasp* what if you don't like lemonade.

All kidding aside, I do think it's a great cliche. It's saying roll with the bad times. Everyone has times when things just aren't going the way you expect them to. We all have points in our lives when we aren't happy.

I think that is one fallacy in our mentality right now. Some seem to think you need to be happy all the time. If you aren't happy all the time, something is wrong and you need to change your life, be it scenery, be it people, be it whatever. I think that sends people into hyper drive trying to be happy all time, which I don't think is a reachable goal.

At times, life just isn't a bowl of cherries. It may take change to go back to being happy but sometimes it just takes shouldering on.

When I think about being happy, I always think about Sarah from my book, Blood Kiss. She's not happy at the beginning of the book but she is attempting to shoulder on. She's got this positive outlook that even being unhappy can't kill. She's got this naivety and innocence. I often wish I were more like her. I know that I can be in the "shouldering on" part of happiness. Even when I'm unhappy, I try and move through it until my mood changes.

So bring on the lemons.


Mechele Armstrong
www.mechelearmstrong.com

Jun 21, 2011

New Release: Fighting Chance by Viki Lyn

Whew! This book has had its share of rewrites, rehashing of plot and arguments between Corbin and Johan and me. I swear, these two! Keeping them in line wasn't easy. You can imagine disciplining a vampire and a Kresnik slayer, and getting these two alone so they could either kill each other or (well you can guess the other option!) had me tearing out my hair.

But I've come to love both of them equally - Johan for his emotional intensity and Corbin for his duty and steel determination to be honorable. Stu and Aric, from Last Chance, also have cameo appearances. Stu just loves needling his brother, like siblings often do!

When writing paranormal, I search the net, books and articles for interesting myths and legends that spark my creativity. I've always been drawn to goddess sites, ancient history and religions, and had the opportunity to visit many sacred sites around the world. My personal experiences seep into my mystical worlds and mix with my imagination.

Lepenski Vir, a Mesolithic site on the banks of the Danube River, was the inspiration for the Kresnik mystical island - Alkas. The initiation that Corbin must pass in order to be strong enough to seek his revenge, has its roots in many ancient rituals.

The book borders on fantasy with its otherworldly settings, but like all my books, it's the romance that drives the story.

Read an excerpt.

Check out my June Giveaway this month at my website: http://www.vikilyn.com/contests.htm

Viki Lyn
http://www.vikilyn.com/

Jun 19, 2011

Edit the past

So, I’m rereading Two For One Deal, the first book in my Leashed series. This is part of my prep to try and finally finish Leashed 4 (still not official title). I’m liking it. TFOD, especially, is one of my favorites of my stories. I enjoy the first meeting between Meg, Michael and Rudy.

But I kind of wish I could go back and edit the past.

There are little bits of the story that I wish I could change. Little details I wish I could remove or add. It would help me so much as I’m writing the sequels. I know more about their magic and their world now and some of the stuff that I put in that first book is limiting where I can go. I’d love to have a more solid description of magic and change the way Meg wielded some of her power. But, I read series books often and I really don’t like when an author changes history, so I’m stuck with what I’ve written. I’ll tell you, though, I’ve got a new appreciation for those authors I’ve been upset with in the past.

It’s no biggie, though. I’ll manage. I hope. This darn book has taken me years. I gave it up last year because it wasn’t going anywhere and I’m still having trouble with it. My main issue, of course, being that I’ve got an established threesome but I think everyone knows I need to work the damn lion into the mix. Not easy because I know a lot of readers aren’t going to appreciate the intrusion. But I think I might have latched onto the idea that’ll save me.

Wish me luck!

Jun 18, 2011

Food, Sex and Poetry

A couple of weeks ago, I was at a meeting of my writers group and we had a couple of poets in to speak. They were lovely, talented people who managed to confirm that I just don’t ‘get’ poetry (if it isn’t Shel Silverstein or the clue to a treasure, it’s not for me).

Aside from that, they discussed an interesting concept: food as imagery for sex. Ostensibly this arose from the idea that any of the emotions and senses associated with the enjoyment of food can also be applied quite easily to sex. They were talking about food AS sex, in a metaphorical sense, while I, as an erotic romance author, immediately thoughts of food AND sex.

We’ve all read scenes or seen scenes in movies… strawberries stroked lovingly over skin, chocolate licked off various body parts… I’m pretty sure I’ve even read about a popsicle. Lovers clean up stray bits of salsa or sauce with a tongue, or eat with suggestive inclusions of fingers. I believe there’s a well-known scene in 9½ Weeks that’s supposed to be a prime example of the sexual power of food. I wasn’t able to watch it. Yuck.

Am I the only one who thinks bringing food to bed is… less than hot? I’m perfectly happy when skin tastes like skin and chocolate tastes like chocolate. I don’t need your skin in my peanut butter and I don’t need my peanut butter on your skin. Sex is fabulous (and messy) on its own -- it doesn’t require additional condiments. Toys, on the other hand... but that's another blog post!

I have read scenes involving food that were hot… such scenes certainly won’t affect my enjoyment of a book, or make me stop reading. And I haven’t entirely dismissed or avoided writing about sex and food together. After all, my characters aren’t ALL carbon copies of me ;) with my likes, dislikes and neuroses, but food in bed will be a topic I avoid when I can, simply because I don’t find the combination particularly sexy. Strangely enough, sex on the kitchen table or counters? Totally hot! But keep the fridge door closed, ‘k?

Anyone with me? Or am I all alone with my neurotic weirdness?

KC Burn

Jun 17, 2011

Fame or Glory?





A shocker for me has been the lack of relationship between the titles the reviewers rave about the most and those that sell best. I expected a strong relationship between a high quality book and impressive sales volume.

I think this is a forest/tree problem, because when I consider for a few moments, it's perfectly understandable. The movies, television shows, and books that are critically acclaimed are seldom the same ones the public embraces.

This is certainly true for me, my favorites have never been the kind of cutting edge masterpieces that win prestigious awards. Sadly, my pets don't usually find glittering commercial success either. I have a real weakness for the scrappy underdogs of the entertainment world.

Still wouldn't it be lovely to be both brilliant and popular? I may have found a new fantasy....

Do your favorites make the top of lists?

Jun 16, 2011

If it's Thursday it must be Belgium

Here's a photo that has absolutely nothing to do with anything.

So it's time for another blog and I am definitely stumped for a blog topic. This was a new release week for me and what I've discovered is my new release days (because it's now days not just a day) mean I get nothing else done. Nothing because I'm jetting across the cyber space spreading good cheer and promotional fairy dust every where I go -- and answering all the comments and emails on Blogger, LJ, Facebook, Goodreads, Twitter -- well, and your normal every day email.

This is not a complaint, by the way, it's just the observation that one tends to fall behind. WAY behind. As a matter of fact, I am currently a minimum of one week behind on regular email (horrifying) including an email to my good friend ZA Maxfield who was asking about tips and tricks for staying motivated when the pressure of work begins to...pulverize you.

As it does all of us sooner or later.

Maybe one reason I've put off answering that email is because I hesitate to say what I'm thinking, which is...the only real fix is to take some serious time off. That's easy to say and not so easy to do when you rely on your writing to pay the bills.

I do have some little rejuvenating tips and tricks and hopefully some other folks will chime in with their own just-add-water moments.

1 - Cultivate a garden. Hey, it can be a rock garden or one of those sandy zen gardens, but having some physical activity that frees your mind and brings both immediate and long term results, is really relaxing. And improves the property value of your home.

2 - Read outside of your genre. Maybe it's just me but when I'm reading within my own genre, I analyze the work in a way I don't when it's poetry or literary fiction or just fiction that I am in no way -- key word here -- competing with.  It's pretty simple, really, we're all fighting for cyber shelf space and so it's not remarkable that we might read a highly acclaimed book within our own genre and feel a tinge of ...why her and not me?

3 - Get out of the house. Unchain yourself from the computer and go do something that has nothing to do with writing. Ultimately it will have to do with writing because, as writers, everything that happens to us is grist for the mill. But go somewhere and do something with zero expectation for your writing. And I don't mean go to the dry cleaner or the grocery store. I mean go somewhere you've been wanting to go but haven't had the time. A museum. A long drive. A visit to a friend.

So what about you? What are tips and tricks do you have to offer your fellow overworked authors?

Jun 9, 2011

“Arrr! Lick Me Nipples” Or the Importance of Another Set of Eyes

Proofreading is such an important step in the writing process (whether the work will also go through a publisher's editing process or not). Proofing is not only key for writers of fiction, but anyone who spends a lot of time writing professional communication or information. It’s also a step where the creator of the content is at a disadvantage. It’s so hard to catch everything when you're the one who wrote the words. Your brain reads what you meant, not what you actually wrote. So it’s often the best approach to get some help from another person.

I recently wrote a short story for the upcoming Hot July Days event at the Goodreads M/M Romance Group. Readers posted pictures and letters as prompts for authors in the group to write short stories. My story is just over 8,000 words in length, and I must have read it ten or more times as I was revising and proofing.

Even in this short of a story and even after reading it over so many times, I missed a couple of obvious typos. My partner read it the other night and pointed them out. I had written “reprehension” for “representative” and “me nipples” for “my nipples.” For that last one she said I had gone into pirate mode, and then she went around the house repeating, “Arrr! Lick me nipples” all night.

That wasn’t the reaction I was going for. A typo like that can really pull the reader out of the moment.

When submitting to a publisher, writing a free read for your website, or polishing any professional piece of written work, I think it’s important to have someone else read it over, at the very least to check for these sorts of typos. No matter how careful you have been in your own proofing you are likely to miss something, and your work will look less professional with each mistake.

I do realize this may not be possible for everyone or every situation, so I thought I’d share three techniques that have worked to help me catch more of my own mistakes.
  1. Make the font size larger and the margins smaller, then print the text out. You’ll see the words in a very different way from how you’ve been viewing them as you wrote and revised the text. You could also try loading it on an eBook reader to get yet a different view.

  2. Read your words aloud. It slows down the flow of words, and I can catch more mistakes that way. I find standing up and walking around helpful too. Not only is this a good idea for us writers who sit a lot of the time, but I also find the act of moving and being in a different location than where I originally wrote the story helps to mix things up for my brain. (On a side note, I believe reading aloud also helps you create, maintain, and strengthen your own voice.)

  3. Have the computer read the text to you. This works great to identify a misspelling that the spell checker won’t catch. For example, my mistake of “me nipples.” Even with a choppy computerized voice, I would have definitely heard the computer read the “me” instead of the “my” that I had meant. For a short story this works great, but it can take a lot of time for something longer and may not be feasible if you’re under a deadline. I use Adobe Acrobat or my Kindle for this. You could also search for “text to speech software” for other options.
Mistakes happen, sometimes even in the work for the most popular and critically-acclaimed authors. I think most readers will forgive one or two such typos, but having even one in the wrong place can really mess with the flow.

What do you think? Are you bothered by typos or can you keep on reading without much distraction? Anyone else have another proofing tip that works for you? I’d love to hear about it.

Sloan Parker
www.sloanparker.com

Jun 2, 2011

Group blogs vs Individual blogs

When my lovely friend Camryn Rhys gave me the idea for this post, at first I thought it might only be applicable to my fellow writers. Then I slapped myself upside the head (since Cam is about 2,000 miles away and couldn't do it herself) and said, "DUH. Everybody blogs."

With that mindset, I figured it might be interesting to look at some of the pros and cons of both individual and group blogging. I do both, and there are definitely good and bad facets of both. On to the show:

Individual blogging - Pro's
  • You have total creative license and control
  • You can post whenever you want to
  • There's no one to answer to
Individual blogging - Con's
  • You have to come up with every idea yourself
  • You're responsible for all the maintenance
  • There's no one to help out
Group blogging - Pro's
  • Lots of hands make light work
  • Many minds make it easier to come up with themes/blog topics
  • More than one person can do administration
Group blogging - Con's
  • Everything has to be put to a vote
  • Scheduling can be difficult
  • Personalities can conflict
So there you have it. What other issues have you found in regards to blogging?
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