Jul 28, 2011

Does Stephen King still get butterflies?

Have you ever wondered that? I do.

We are coming up on my sixth year of being published. I went to RT in the spring of 2005 and pitched to a wonderful editor at Loose Id. Came home, polished and submitted. Blood Kiss hit the 'net in October of 2005.

I submitted a new story today. I still get the achy feeling when I hit send. I automatically want to call the story back with "I'm not ready" flashing like a big neon sign in my brain.

I've accepted that I'm always going to be that way. No matter how many times I submit, no matter how many times my stories get accepted, I will always feel the nervous butterflies floating in my stomach.

Does Joss Whedon pitch a storyline and wonder if it's coming across? Does Sherrilyn Kenyon shake a little before she gets up to speak in front of an audience? Does Karen Rose wonder if her story is accurate and how it will come across?

Yet we (and I include myself in that group) keep doing what we are doing even when it makes us neurotic creative types. Maybe that's how we stay sharp?

All I know is I will now be on pins and needles waiting to hear back from my editor.


Mechele Armstrong
www.mechelearmstrong.com

Jul 26, 2011

New Release: Bringing Him Home

I'm jumping up and down with glee because my second novel with Loose-Id has been released today. Bringing Him Home was actually the first m/m novel I wrote, and I'm pleased to see my pioneer characters are out for all to enjoy. Here is the blurb:


Jared knew that looking for a man to love was pointless because he’d never be able to bring him home. But one chance meeting and one hot night with Kyle had Jared seriously trying to figure out if he really had to live by the rules of someone else’s intolerance. Torn between wanting Kyle and facing the narrow-mindedness of a small country town, Jared didn’t know what to do. Could Kyle really want Jared enough to deal with the town's hostility together? By the time Jared got himself ready to talk to Kyle, to ask him, Kyle had left.
Kyle had been looking to find someone to love, looking for a place to call home, and one blazing night spent in Jared’s arms and Kyle knew Jared was just the man he was looking for. But Kyle had a feeling Jared didn’t want to bring Kyle home with him and when he found out why he had no choice but to leave. It didn’t matter that he wanted Jared, or even that Jared wanted him. The town where Jared lived was the one town Kyle swore he would never set foot in again.

And if you want to read an excerpt click here

I hope you love these characters and their story as much as I did writing them.

Penny

Jul 23, 2011

Animals as Secondary Characters

Animals as Secondary Characters

I’m an animal lover. Our small farm in Western Washington near Puget Sound consists of two pony-sized dogs, a prince disguised as an orange tabby cat, and one prima donna horse. You’ll rarely read a book of mine which doesn’t have an animal as a secondary character. Animals add a bit of humor and fun to any situation.

In The Gift Horse I experimented with a small amount of scenes in Gabby’s point of view. Gabby is a very large Hanoverian show horse. She’s got an attitude, and she knows how to use it. Essentially, she’s modeled after my own opinionated Hanoverian mare. Throughout the book, the heroine is being sabotaged, and Gabby witnesses the acts on more than one occasion. I loved developing Gabby’s character, giving her a quirky personality and a voice.

In Fourth and Goal, the animal star of the book is a kleptomaniac chocolate Lab named Simon. Simon is constantly stealing things, such as the heroine’s only set of car keys. He is also terrorized by the heroine’s cat.

Horses and dogs were a natural for me to write about. Cats were not, until a few years ago when my cat-hating husband allowed a stray cat into our house. The next thing we knew, we were owned by a cat. I knew this cat (and how quickly he won over my husband) had to be in my next book and he is.

In my sequel to Fourth and Goal, the heroine is an animal communicator. The animal star of the show is the orange tabby cat who lives next door. The cat, a bit of a drama-queen, is quite vocal after having been relegated to the role of barn cat by the new owner of the property.  The heroine confronts her neighbor, a bad-boy pro football player, and insists he take care of his cat. The football player has no intention of letting a fur-spreading, litter-box using, flea-infested cat into his home. The cat’s goal is to reinstate his role as house cat. If you have cats, you know what’s coming next. In no time, the tabby has taken over the house. He sleeps on the pillow, uses the arm of the leather couch for a scratching post, and spreads cat hair everywhere. The hero is at his mercy. You gotta love a man who loves animals, regardless of his other flaws. It’s a hoot writing about how this little tabby cat wraps the hero around his paw and a great way to show this alpha male’s soft side.

I’ll continue to use animals in my books for as long as I write. Do you enjoy reading a book with animals as secondary characters? Have you read any good books lately with animals as secondary characters? I’d love to hear your comments.

Jami Davenport
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Jami Davenport has been writing since she was old enough to know the alphabet. An advocate of happy endings, Jami writes sexy romantic comedy, sizzling suspense, and equestrian fiction. Jami lives on a small farm near Puget Sound with her husband, a former Green Beret turned plumber. In her spare time, Jami rides and shows her dressage horse. An avid boater, Jami has spent countless hours in the San Juan Islands, the setting for her first two books. In her opinion, it is the most beautiful place on earth.

Jul 21, 2011

Dangerous Ground 4: DEAD RUN

Alternate title, Josh Has No Blog Topic This Month

So in honor of my utter lack of time management skills, I'm offering up an excerpt from my next Loose Id release -- the one I'm still, er, writing. Do I need to mention that it's rough, rough, rough? But that's kind of fun in it's own way, isn't it?

Say yes.

So for your viewing pleasure and with pictures even...

Quick and Dirty Summary:
Special Agents Will and Taylor desperately need their long planned romantic holiday in Paris, but an explosive turn of events leaves them questioning whether their partnership is a thing of the past.

Excerpt:
There was something familiar about the man at the airline ticket counter.



Taylor studied him for a moment. Medium height -- slightly stooped -- medium weight, aquiline features beneath the tweed cap. Nothing unique about an old man in a raincoat. In fact, the very ordinariness of him was part of what caught Taylor’s eye. It was like the old guy had taken inconspicuous to an art form.

“Next!” called one of the agents at the check in desk. The party in front of Taylor dragged their children and luggage to the next open space at the long desk. Taylor stepped forward. The serpentine line shuffled and scooted behind him.

Had he remembered the photos of Riley? Taylor double-checked quickly. No. He’d left them on the kitchen table. Damn. He knew how much Will missed that damn dog and he’d meant the snapshots as a little surprise.

Oh well. If Will wanted to see Riley that much, he could always come home.

Taylor glanced up automatically as the old man ahead of him turned away from the ticket counter.

Dark eyes met his, held his gaze for an instant, then dismissed him. The back of Taylor’s neck prickled. No. No way. It couldn’t be.

But he couldn’t quite ignore that feeling of recognition.

Yann Helloco.

He’d been reading an article in American Cop on the history of modern terrorism in Europe and that had to be why he was suddenly seeing a long dead Breton separatist in the first senior citizen wearing a beret who crossed his path.

Okay, not a beret, but close enough to trigger the connection.

A ticket agent at the far end opened and nodded to Taylor. “Sir.”

The line behind Taylor breathed a collective sigh. One step closer to the prize.

Taylor hesitated.

“Next in line please.” The ticket agent encouraged when Taylor didn’t seem to be getting the hint.

Taylor groaned inwardly. He was probably wrong.

More importantly, he was on vacation. He had a plane to catch. A plane he had no intention of missing. It had been eleven months since he’d seen Will. Eleven months since they’d been together. No fucking way was he missing this plane.

But what if he wasn’t wrong? What if by some crazy coincidence he had just seen a ghost?

Oh what the hell.

He moved instead to the agent who had assisted Helloco, if Helloco it was. She was busily putting a little CLOSED sign at her place, with the air of one who was taking her break come hell or high water.

He sized her up fast. Cute and prim in her navy blue polyester. A girl in love with the rules and regulations. He looked for her name badge. Bridget Martinez.

“Bridget.” She did her best not to see him, but Taylor pasted on his most charming smile and pushed harder. “That guy you just gave a boarding pass to -- where is he headed?”

Bridget looked as surprised as if her ticket machine had asked her to bring it back a cappuccino. “Sir?”

“Your last customer. I need his name and his flight number.” Taylor already had his DSS ID out. He was keeping his voice down, trying to avoid attention, but she was backing away from the counter, shaking her head, doing her best to separate herself from whatever situation he was trying to drag her into.

“I’m sorry but we can’t give out that information.”

Taylor pushed his ID toward her, hoping the problem was her vision. “I’m with the Diplomatic Security Service.”

Bridget stopped backing away but her expression grew more skeptical. “I never heard of it.”

“I’m with the State Department.”

“You just said you were with the Diplomacy Service. Anyway, that’s not what your badge says.”

“The hell it doesn’t.” Taylor jabbed his finger at the blue and gold ring around the seal on his badge. Department of State. Diplomatic Security Service. It says it right here.”

Bridget’s didn’t exactly roll her eyes, but if he thought she’d been born yesterday, he clearly had another think coming. “Anyone can have one of those made.”

“Are you kidding me?”

“It doesn’t even look real.”

As much as Taylor hadn’t wanted to start this, her obstructive attitude hardened his resolve. “Get your manager.” He watched the luggage moving on the conveyor belt behind Bridget. “Did he check a bag?”

“Who?”

He smothered his exasperation. “The guy you just checked in. Do not let any of his luggage go through.”

Bridget was looking at Taylor as though he were a nut. In fairness, working at a ticket counter in an airport probably jaded you as fast as working in law enforcement.

Bridget waved to another airline employee in a navy suit. “Mr. Yousef! Mr. Yousef, can I see you please.”

Maybe she was trying for discretion, but the overall impression was clean up on aisle three! Bored passengers were staring their way and the man who might be -- but probably was not -- Yann Helloco was now a quickly disappearing tan raincoat in a crowd of tan raincoats heading for the security screening lines.

Mr. Yousef, big, black and bald with an unexpectedly charming smile, joined Bridget at the counter. He silently examined Taylor’s ID as Bridget filled him on the details.

“This customer is trying to get personal information about another customer. He says he’s a secret agent.”

What?” Taylor spared her a startled look before turning back to Yousef. “I’m with the DSS. That’s a division of the Bureau of Diplomatic Security.”

“Sure.” Mr. Yousef spoke in a deep and melodious bass. “You’re the guys who protect foreign bigwigs when they visit.”

“Right.” It was like the relief of finding someone who spoke English in a foreign country. “Among other things. Bridget here just processed a passenger who I believe might be wanted by Interpol.” He was trying very hard not to use the “T” word.

“Might,” Mr. Yousef repeated as the conveyor belt behind him lurched forward again.

“Please don’t let that bag go through without screening it,” Taylor told Bridget who was waiting hopefully for Mr. Yousef to chop him into mincemeat. She ignored him.

“Bag?” Mr. Yousef turned to Bridget who said with a tight little smile, “I tried to tell this gentleman that the other customer didn’t check any baggage.”

Taylor opened his mouth, but really, bigger fish to fry. He turned to Mr. Yousef. Mr. Yousef said, “Bridget, did you not see this agent’s identification and badge?”

“Well, yes, but you can get those made anywhere. And it doesn’t look real.”

Mr. Yousef shook his head apologetically at Taylor. “Let’s get the information Special Agent MacAllister needs,” he told Bridget.

Bridget returned to her computer and tapped the keys in quick, irritated strokes. She moved aside for Mr. Yousef who read aloud, “Yannick Hinault. He’s on his way to Paris on Delta Flight DL67 departing from Gate 57.”

Yann Helloco and Yannick Hinault. Not exactly case closed but surely too similar for coincidence?

“I’m leaving my stuff with you.” Taylor unloaded his suitcase and carryon bag ignoring Bridget’s instinctive protest. “Can you call the gate and have them hold that flight? And have security meet me there.”

“I can try,” Mr. Yousef said. “But you better be sure this is your guy or I wouldn’t want to be in your shoes.”

Taylor was already moving in that easy law enforcement lope that covered a lot of ground without giving the public the impression that there was cause for alarm. Even so he was moving way too fast for anyone in an airport and security officers were moving to intercept him as he headed for the screening tables.

A quick survey of the lines of shoeless and coatless passengers confirmed that there was no sign of Helloco or Hinault or whoever this asshole was who was already starting to interfere with Taylor’s much needed vacation.

Then the unis were blocking his view. Taylor flashed his tin, doing his best to explain the situation without triggering all the alarms in the place. It was his bitter experience that getting airport security involved was usually more trouble than it was worth, but there was no way around it. It was at times like these he missed Will. Will was so much better at finessing…well, everyone.

“Are you armed, Agent MacAllister?” a short, squat guy with a face like the Great Pumpkin questioned.

Taylor shook his head. “No. I’m on my annual leave. My weapon is secured at my place of residence.”

The rent-a-cops began to ask him the usual stuff -- had he been drinking, was he on medication? Did he look like a guy who had been drinking or was on medication? In the back of Taylor’s mind he could hear Will cautioning him to be cool, to play the game, so he bit back his immediate retort. He knew the ritual was partly departmental flexing of muscles and partly the fact that these were jokers who considered snagging a pair of nail scissors off old ladies a coup for law enforcement.

Another uniform joined the crowd surrounding Taylor. “He checks out.”

“Sorry for the hassle, but we have to follow procedure,” the Great Pumpkin told Taylor. “You know how it is.”

“Yeah. No problem. Can we move?”

To their credit, they did hustle their asses, leading the way through a complex maze of back door corridors until they reached Gate 57 where by now flight DL67 was boarding. Taylor strode quickly through the waiting area, scanning the seats and lines of bored looking passengers. There was no sign of Hinault.

He began studying body types and facial structure. If Hinault was Helloco, he was one cool and clever customer, so Taylor was putting no trick in the book past him.

The airline agent behind the customer service station spoke into the microphone. “Will passenger Yannick Hinault please report to the customer service desk? Passenger Yannick Hinault please report to the customer service desk.”

Taylor moved to the edge of the waiting area and watched for anyone trying to slip away. No one came to the desk and no one showed any interest in missing their flight.

Taylor swore inwardly. He turned to the milling security officers. The Great Pumpkin raised his arms in a beats me gesture.

Seriously?

Seriously?

Jul 20, 2011

Ring the Alarm! Downloading Illegal Content Just Got Trickier

I'm sure all of you have heard your favorite author or musician talk about copyright infringement and how the detrimental effects of downloading from file sharing sites essentially eats away at our livelihoods.

Put away the cheese! My post will not be another whine fest. In fact, a little celebrating is order! Recently and after considerable due diligence, a group of content companies and Internet service providers announced a new consumer education initiative called the Copyright Alert System that will notify Internet service subscribers when their accounts are being used to download copyrighted materials.

According to the newly established Center for Copyright Information, the program will be similar to the fraud alerts consumers receive about their credit card or bank accounts. Instead of one email, the system will send up to five alerts if the violation persists.

For example, if a person downloads my book Forever, I Do from a content sharing site, the user will receive an alert from their Internet Service Provider. The alert will identify their account as being misused for content theft. The email will also explain the violation, define copyright infringement and remind them of the terms they agreed upon when they signed up for the Internet service.

If the problem persists, the consumer will receive another email alert containing an online form acknowledging receipt of the previous communication. If the person continues to violate their ISP's piracy terms, then the Internet Service Provider can take action via "mitigating measures" which may include: redirection to a landing page until the subscriber contacts his/her ISP or slower Internet speeds.


The Center for Copyright Infringement hopes that the situation won't go that far. They believe that most people don't even realize that downloading and sharing copyrighted material is illegal. So the backbone of their alert system is to help consumers do the right thing. And according to the Center's website, once a consumer is educated about copyright infringement most will stop engaging in illegal downloading and turn to a legitimate outlet like Loose-Id.com to either sample or purchase content.

So, the alert is sort of like the security guard in a department store. If you know he/she is watching, you'll be less tempted to steal that yellow polka dot bikini you've been hankering for since the January thaw. Instead, you'll either wait until it goes on sale or find a knock off at your friendly neighborhood superstore.

Personally, I have high hopes that the group's educational initiative will work. I liken the alert to a warning label, but with a win-win outcome for all. The consumer will be educated, while the owner will continue to be rightly compensated. It's the American Way.

So what do you think about the new system? Do you think it will work or just amount to a hill of beans?


To learn more about the Center for Copyright Information and their copyright alert system you can visit their official website. To learn more about Koko Brown, you can visit me at http://www.kokobrown.net/.

Jul 16, 2011

The Pack Rat Gene

I have it. I’m not a hoarder or anything (I’ve moved too many times -- if I were a hoarder I would have been lynched by a band of angry movers long ago), but I don’t like to throw things away. Especially if I think they might be useful… someday.

Throwing things away usually involves a long internal debate and my tendency towards pack-rattiness became even more obvious to me last week.

Who has Gmail? And how many of you have used 78% of your allotted storage space? Me! *waves hand wildly*

Clearly, it was time to do something. Probably the fact I had over 37,000 unread threads (yes, you read that right) should have clued me in, but I kept thinking maybe I’d go back and read them. I can hear your derisive, hysterical laughter from here, you know, and I’m hurt ;)

Now, I do my best to read personal and business emails. Most of the unread emails are excerpts and whatnot from various yahoo loops I belong to. My intentions are pure. But I‘m able to read those emails only infrequently.

So, after I submitted edits last week, I started hacking down the weeds. I’m now down to 13,900 unread threads! Woo-hoo! Yes, most of them were deleted unread. But not all. It might take me the rest of the year, but I’d like to be at a point where I have NO unread threads. I’m not sure what that sort of accomplishment will feel like, but I’ll definitely deserve a gold star for my forehead.

KC Burn

Jul 15, 2011

OCD in thought and action




On those rare occasions when my head isn’t buzzing with stories, I think about the business of writing. Yeah, as a matter of fact that is my picture in the dictionary next to obsessed.

Self-publishing has a whole lot of appeal. Instant gratification (well practically)–I write it, I publish it. There’s none of that submitting, waiting to hear, revisions, or edits. And therein lies the downside. I’m not one of those flawless writers who really don’t need editors and copy editors and proof readers. Yes, all of those services can be purchased, but that takes a big leap of faith that the income from the the self-published title will offset the costs paid up front.

The other big downside is marketing. I’m not a brand name. Nor am I gifted at promotion.

Does this mean I’ll never self-publish another title? Not at all. I am an incurable optimist. There are stories that don’t easily fit into any of the established publisher’s guidelines. Too short, too long, unpopular sub-genre any these categories are great candidates for direct to digital release.

If you’ve tried it, I’d love to hear about your experience. If you’ve decided against self-publish please share.

Jul 14, 2011

Here Comes the Snow...in Summer

I’m getting to the end of another round of edits to my current manuscript. Part of this book takes place during a blizzard that lands on top of my two heroes as they travel across the US to celebrate Christmas with their families. Well, here in Ohio it’s the middle of July and 80° F outside. Not much going on in the way of snow or Christmas.

It can be a challenge to add in the layers of sensory descriptions that give the story a sense of time and place when you’re ready to hit the pool while your characters are slogging through the snowdrifts.

But that dichotomy can make writing about a particular setting an engaging challenge. By writing about a time and/or place I’m not currently (or have never been) familiar with, I get a chance to do a little research, get inspired, and think outside the box in order to find a unique, vivid detail that will help ground the reader in the scene.

I’ve talked before (and maybe even on this blog) about how I like to use photos for inspiration, especially for settings. Here’s what helped me get in the spirit of winter and all things Christmas:

- I searched for winter and Christmas images at stock photography sites, Google Images, and other photo sites like flickr.com to help spark my creativity.

- While browsing the pics I kept a list of details that came to mind (including scents and sounds) and then related the most relevant ones to my character (his past, present, and future) and how he might emotionally react to each detail.

- I had the fan blowing on my face while I viewed the photos. Gave me that nice cool feeling that helped me forget it was hot outside. It was almost like being in the middle of a blizzard. Almost.

- Oh and I sang along with Christmas carols on my iPod. Because that’s just fun.

Had it been winter here in Ohio, I might not have gone to such lengths to get inspired, and I may have missed opportunities to push my descriptions past what I usually think of in terms of Christmas and the winter weather.

Of course, I hope I always push to write interesting setting descriptions, but this time around I’m glad I had a chance to write about winter in summer.

I'd love to hear other ideas...how would you get into the holiday spirit mid-summer?

Happy Holidays (a little early)!

Sloan Parker
www.sloanparker.com

Jul 1, 2011

Writing Sex Scenes with Life

When you read a sex scene, do you ever think to yourself – how did that writer bring that sex scene to life? If you’re squirming in your seat or feeling the urge to fan your face, the writer has probably made the sex scene leap off the page (whoa, there’s a visual!). So how do we do it? Well, first of all, writing sex scenes involves much more than insert tab A into slot B, and if your sex scenes read like that you’ll soon have your reader either throwing the book across the room or falling asleep.

Take this example:

He pulled her panties off and then spread her legs.

Not very titillating, right? Now let’s try this:

Trailing the pads of his fingers up the sleek muscles in her thighs, he reached for the waistband of her navy silk panties. He started to pull ever so slowly, working the material over her hips and now her legs, reveling in the vision he was uncovering with every downward inch of the material. The scent of her arousal wafted to his nose.

Now, yes, I used more words in general in the second example, but what else did I do? I added senses – he’s feeling the sleek muscles, he’s seeing her body revealed, he’s smelling her unique scent. I also added details – what color panties she’s wearing, where his fingers are, etc.

It’s this “layering” – the adding of senses and details that really make a sex scene come alive. So the next time you read a great scene, ask yourself – how did the author weave this story so effortlessly and how long did it take her to make it sound effortless?


To learn more about Cassandra, visit her website at http://www.booksbycassandracarr.com. To read the first chapter of her current release, Talk to Me, check out http://www.loose-id.com/Talk-to-Me.aspx. You can like her Facebook page at http://www.facebook.com/AuthorCassandraCarr or follow her on Twitter at http://www.twitter.com/Cassandra_Carr.

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