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Apr 25, 2012

Setting and Sports Romances

So I am an unabashed baseball fan. A Yankees fan, even. Yeah, yeah, go ahead and roll your eyes.

I think in a lot of ways, baseball is an ideal sport for me. It’s polite and gentlemanly in its way, but it’s tense and exciting, too. It’s orderly and statistical, but it’s also unpredictable. Fans are smart and passionate. The whole history of the sport is riddled with triumph and heartbreak, with cheating and honesty, with colorful characters, villains, and heroes.

Sounds kind of like a romance novel, doesn’t it?

I think that my writing a baseball romance was an inevitability. Beyond the obvious intersection of my interests here, a sports romance has one other key element: setting. I love a vivid setting in a novel, one that lives and breathes as much as the characters do. I want to know what everything looks like, smells like, feels like. I love nitty-gritty details. That was something I was conscious of as I wrote. The novel takes place in New York City primarily—my two heroes are both players for the same fictional MLB team—but it also takes place in stadiums, on fields, in locker rooms.

As a writer, I like to have a clear picture of the setting, so I draw maps and diagrams. I knew which parts of the stadium were where: the distance from the locker room to the field, the locations of the executive offices, the parking lot. My fictional stadium is magically located roughly where Ebbets Field once stood, which I never say in the book, but I knew which roads the characters would have to drive on to get to Manhattan. I did a ton of research, too, to get the cadence of speech right—how do baseball players talk to each other? how do sportscasters talk about baseball—and to make sure all my terminology was right. I watched documentaries, I read several books, I listened to baseball podcasts, and, of course, I watched a ton of games. (Not a hardship, by the way!) Immersing myself in the world of baseball was really key to my creating what I thought was a convincing setting. And hopefully, it’s a setting in the same way New York is a setting, so that the reader sees it as color and detail and not as an overwhelming amount of information!

Kate McMurray is a NYC-based writer, editor, and baseball fanatic. She writes m/m romances and reads lots of books. She also likes crafts and plays the violin and lives in Brooklyn in an apartment over an ice cream parlor. Kate’s baseball novel, Out in the Field, is available now.

Website: www.katemcmurray.com
Twitter: @katemcmwriter

Jul 14, 2011

Here Comes the Snow...in Summer

I’m getting to the end of another round of edits to my current manuscript. Part of this book takes place during a blizzard that lands on top of my two heroes as they travel across the US to celebrate Christmas with their families. Well, here in Ohio it’s the middle of July and 80° F outside. Not much going on in the way of snow or Christmas.

It can be a challenge to add in the layers of sensory descriptions that give the story a sense of time and place when you’re ready to hit the pool while your characters are slogging through the snowdrifts.

But that dichotomy can make writing about a particular setting an engaging challenge. By writing about a time and/or place I’m not currently (or have never been) familiar with, I get a chance to do a little research, get inspired, and think outside the box in order to find a unique, vivid detail that will help ground the reader in the scene.

I’ve talked before (and maybe even on this blog) about how I like to use photos for inspiration, especially for settings. Here’s what helped me get in the spirit of winter and all things Christmas:

- I searched for winter and Christmas images at stock photography sites, Google Images, and other photo sites like flickr.com to help spark my creativity.

- While browsing the pics I kept a list of details that came to mind (including scents and sounds) and then related the most relevant ones to my character (his past, present, and future) and how he might emotionally react to each detail.

- I had the fan blowing on my face while I viewed the photos. Gave me that nice cool feeling that helped me forget it was hot outside. It was almost like being in the middle of a blizzard. Almost.

- Oh and I sang along with Christmas carols on my iPod. Because that’s just fun.

Had it been winter here in Ohio, I might not have gone to such lengths to get inspired, and I may have missed opportunities to push my descriptions past what I usually think of in terms of Christmas and the winter weather.

Of course, I hope I always push to write interesting setting descriptions, but this time around I’m glad I had a chance to write about winter in summer.

I'd love to hear other ideas...how would you get into the holiday spirit mid-summer?

Happy Holidays (a little early)!

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